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Waiting for you is like waiting for the rain to fall.
Your answers short and sweet, far and few between.
Waiting for you is like waiting for the sun to rise.
Sitting holding my breath till something beautiful happens.
Waiting for you is like slowly dying..
Nothing could be worse than the sound of your own crying.
Waiting for you is like..
A cold death that may feel like its worth it.. but makes you
question your sanity..
Your answers short and sweet, far and few between.
Waiting for you is like waiting for the sun to rise.
Sitting holding my breath till something beautiful happens.
Waiting for you is like slowly dying..
Nothing could be worse than the sound of your own crying.
Waiting for you is like..
A cold death that may feel like its worth it.. but makes you
question your sanity..
Published 21st Jul 2014
| Edited 23rd Jul 2014
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21st Jul 2014 8:13am
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21st Jul 2014 9:03am
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22nd Jul 2014 2:44am
I got into it in the beginning - could relate. Lost it with death. Too much too soon. The jump from the 2nd to the 3rd too deep.
23rd Jul 2014 6:57am
I think its necessary, this is a poem about someone a fell for too hard too fast.
So to me it is appropriate but thank you i will keep that in mind
So to me it is appropriate but thank you i will keep that in mind
25th Jul 2014 3:31am
