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Haikus from Hell
It is hot down here
With so many people
What are we to do
What are we to do
How can we absolve our sins
Must we sit and burn
Must we sit and burn
Did my sins justify this
There seems no escape
There seems no escape
Can't beat them so let's join them
Can we see the boss
Can we see the boss
Old Nick can we assist you
Cut wood stoke the fire
Cut wood stoke the fire
A job for life and for death
It is hot down here
Published 14th Jul 2014
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14th Jul 2014 9:15pm
You spun your senryu-poem in circles which gives an impression of the endlessness of the purgatorial fire. Cleverly done!
14th Jul 2014 11:51pm
