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Who Is This Man?
So many thoughts are running through my head
Over things that were and were not said
Damn....who is this man?
Why is he controling my hand?
As I am laying nuzzled in my covers
Thoughts wander to possibly being his lover
Laying here squirming.......
Completely over taken by yearning
Tell me please....who is this man?
God knows I want more as soon as I can
Mmmmmm....faster and deeper I go
Then I take it a little more slow
Sweet release and heavy breathing
Hmmmm....laying here totally disbelieving
Please, please tell me....who is this man?
And tell me how he took over my hand!!!
Over things that were and were not said
Damn....who is this man?
Why is he controling my hand?
As I am laying nuzzled in my covers
Thoughts wander to possibly being his lover
Laying here squirming.......
Completely over taken by yearning
Tell me please....who is this man?
God knows I want more as soon as I can
Mmmmmm....faster and deeper I go
Then I take it a little more slow
Sweet release and heavy breathing
Hmmmm....laying here totally disbelieving
Please, please tell me....who is this man?
And tell me how he took over my hand!!!
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Re: Who Is This Man?
Anonymous
11th Jul 2014 6:16am
Um.....I'm blown away! This is brilliant. Sexy edged with sheer class. Luv it! Xo :)
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Re: Who Is This Man?
11th Jul 2014 6:22am
Oh sweety ty u so very much!! I think u know who my inspiration was ;-)
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2014 9:17pm
lilsouthernbelle,
You certainly have a way with words and that hand of yours! ; )
Enjoyed your squirming line!
tornado
You certainly have a way with words and that hand of yours! ; )
Enjoyed your squirming line!
tornado
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12th Jul 2014 9:00pm
Our hearts dictate who and when, we've got little say in it. Intriguing write Belle. Enjoyed it.
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12th Jul 2014 9:07pm
As always X i value ur input my friend. Homestly i have found real inspiration again
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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Re: Who Is This Man?
7th Aug 2014 3:09am
A man who's whispers seep into your skin and tether your thoughts to his wishes to see your skin burn through ghostly kisses.
Invoking write, gives the mind a pleasant escape. Truly enjoyed.
Invoking write, gives the mind a pleasant escape. Truly enjoyed.
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7th Aug 2014 5:07am
Thank Sir for such a wonderful comment. The way u write i am more than sure that u urself have guided quite a few hands.
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle