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Him.
I miss you.
I know we won't have this anymore.
I know I fucked up.
I know I can't fix it.
I wish I knew how to fix it.
Somehow I can't help myself when I think of you.
Somehow I know we can do this.
Somehow I know you still love me.
Somehow I still have faith.
Somehow I still love you.
You miss me.
You want me.
You want to hold me and kiss me.
You want me to be yours.
You want me but you replace me.
Our love is great.
Our lives are different.
Our lives are fucked up
Our feelings are the same but we can never make it up.
Our hearts beat as one.
We fight.
We cry.
We know deep down that both of us still care.
We know we want each other.
We want love and passion.
She is in the way.
She loves you.
She wants you with all her heart.
She is waiting for you.
She will miss you.
He is in the way.
He loves me.
He wants the sex.
He is always looking for a good time, and I'm always there.
He will miss me.
I love you, I want you, I miss you, and I wish I could hold you tight and never let you go. I know I messed up, and I wish I could fix it. I just want one thing, To know you will always be there, and will always be mine. However I'm pretty sure you will never come back to me.
I know we won't have this anymore.
I know I fucked up.
I know I can't fix it.
I wish I knew how to fix it.
Somehow I can't help myself when I think of you.
Somehow I know we can do this.
Somehow I know you still love me.
Somehow I still have faith.
Somehow I still love you.
You miss me.
You want me.
You want to hold me and kiss me.
You want me to be yours.
You want me but you replace me.
Our love is great.
Our lives are different.
Our lives are fucked up
Our feelings are the same but we can never make it up.
Our hearts beat as one.
We fight.
We cry.
We know deep down that both of us still care.
We know we want each other.
We want love and passion.
She is in the way.
She loves you.
She wants you with all her heart.
She is waiting for you.
She will miss you.
He is in the way.
He loves me.
He wants the sex.
He is always looking for a good time, and I'm always there.
He will miss me.
I love you, I want you, I miss you, and I wish I could hold you tight and never let you go. I know I messed up, and I wish I could fix it. I just want one thing, To know you will always be there, and will always be mine. However I'm pretty sure you will never come back to me.
Published 7th Jul 2014
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- Edited 7th Jul 2014 10:23pm
7th Jul 2014 10:21pm
I love all the 'I' 'You' 'We' 'Our' lines. This all adds to the poem having a very personal feel about it. We are made to feel that we're intruding when we read this, such is its style. It's like a telephone conversation that we're not supposed to hear. One other thing, there feels like a clever switch towards the end, when you start with the She & he lines. It moves into another direction, sustaining interest with the reader. There's an almost pleading verse at the end where your heart seems to be spelling out its fate.
A classy read.
A classy read.
