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snapped
Body racked with pain,
Heart shattered and thrown away,
Loves turned to anger,
The man i knew,
Is now a stranger,
Happieness turned to depression,
Theres no light in the world i live in,
Days turned into nights,
With endless battles and fights,
Thoughts turned clouded,
Does he still love me.
I doubt it,
My freedom has turned into prison,
If i killed him,
Would anyone miss him,
I cant take anymore of this abuse,
Tonights fight i will not lose,
The battle begins and he thinks he's won,
I act defeated,
But i'm not done,
I grab a knife and tuck it beneath the sheets,
And cut his throat in his sleep.
Heart shattered and thrown away,
Loves turned to anger,
The man i knew,
Is now a stranger,
Happieness turned to depression,
Theres no light in the world i live in,
Days turned into nights,
With endless battles and fights,
Thoughts turned clouded,
Does he still love me.
I doubt it,
My freedom has turned into prison,
If i killed him,
Would anyone miss him,
I cant take anymore of this abuse,
Tonights fight i will not lose,
The battle begins and he thinks he's won,
I act defeated,
But i'm not done,
I grab a knife and tuck it beneath the sheets,
And cut his throat in his sleep.
Published 2nd Apr 2011
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6th Jun 2012 1:55am
solid transmision! good word use! in-appropriate punctuation! there are several questions in here yet (?) none/ No need for the periods(.) and commas(,)this only clutters the form and insults a reader... stil i enjoyed the words and the sensation included when reading this piece..
