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Once again…Once More
Where to begin " proclaim its not you " just me
You were all I wished you could be
Will that help - set you free?
Please don’t beg, please don’t plea..
There’s no point in asking once again “why”
And you know me I won’t lie
Gently cutting the cord, severing the tie
Whilst gently whispering my final “good bye”
We’ll always have these moments, imprinted and set
Lest you are worried that maybe I might forget
So there’s no need to curse the day we met
I promise I leave with no thoughts of regret
We gave it all put in a good try
A heavy heart a sad sigh
So I say my final “good bye”
Keeping my head held up high
You were all I wished you could be
Will that help - set you free?
Please don’t beg, please don’t plea..
There’s no point in asking once again “why”
And you know me I won’t lie
Gently cutting the cord, severing the tie
Whilst gently whispering my final “good bye”
We’ll always have these moments, imprinted and set
Lest you are worried that maybe I might forget
So there’s no need to curse the day we met
I promise I leave with no thoughts of regret
We gave it all put in a good try
A heavy heart a sad sigh
So I say my final “good bye”
Keeping my head held up high
Published 5th Jul 2014
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5th Jul 2014 2:13am
well done heartbreak poetry. we might ride off into the sunset alone, but the sunset is still beautiful...
5th Jul 2014 2:26am
5th Jul 2014 7:24am
...a soft melancholy to this ink, yet the strength to move on spoke volumes... Enjoyed, Fee! Xo
5th Jul 2014 12:08pm
tks...best I could manage in the early hours this morning, needs some work!!! curtsy bow..
Anonymous
6th Jul 2014 7:01am
Love the story, so many go through it, I want more...more reasons more detail, elaborate on this piece, but very cool, much enjoyed.
6th Jul 2014 10:45am
Just the simple idea of one staying true to themselves and ending a relationship when there's nothing really wrong with it, except you're really not that into it..This used to happen to me and I'd have that sinking feeling of how to go about letting them down gently..Something most boys learn to do quite well (generalization)..girls seem to somehow stay..Hmm thanks, I'll do a rework, or how bout you complete it from a boys perspective..
Anonymous
6th Jul 2014 4:08pm
This is heartbreaking. I can feel your tears soaking your page. Expressed emotions well. :)
