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Coup D'etat
You’re the stain that scars the silence
Evidently echoed in everyone’s eyes
The whispers articulate the evidence
That results in my elegant demise.
It is the shadow that tailgates the night
Annihilating every anchor I have in sight
The catalyst that induced instant confusion
Right from the start of your epic intrusion
The remains of your anarchy are engraved
Unrepentant steadfast they remain
So I surrender seeking shelter for my shame
Allowing only my suspicions to be displayed
I will watch as they crown and cloak you King
Audience the occasion and applaud your victory
Watch as they bow down as kiss your ring
But I solemnly swear I will not repeat history
Evidently echoed in everyone’s eyes
The whispers articulate the evidence
That results in my elegant demise.
It is the shadow that tailgates the night
Annihilating every anchor I have in sight
The catalyst that induced instant confusion
Right from the start of your epic intrusion
The remains of your anarchy are engraved
Unrepentant steadfast they remain
So I surrender seeking shelter for my shame
Allowing only my suspicions to be displayed
I will watch as they crown and cloak you King
Audience the occasion and applaud your victory
Watch as they bow down as kiss your ring
But I solemnly swear I will not repeat history
Published 28th Jun 2014
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28th Jun 2014 7:00am
"You’re the stain that scars the silence
Evidently echoed in everyone’s eyes
The whispers articulate the evidence
That results in my elegant demise."<- I loved these opening lines, they set the tone beautiful for this wonderful story! Very fond of your Pen! Xo
Evidently echoed in everyone’s eyes
The whispers articulate the evidence
That results in my elegant demise."<- I loved these opening lines, they set the tone beautiful for this wonderful story! Very fond of your Pen! Xo
28th Jun 2014 7:55am
28th Jun 2014 8:01am
i like but i see an evolution in your future......
content and language is there.....
the rhyme scheme is good but i would like to see more abstract mix up in the symetry from you.
i been watchin and you been workin, you are wicked close to the next level....
i'm not dissin at all i love it....
please continue..............
content and language is there.....
the rhyme scheme is good but i would like to see more abstract mix up in the symetry from you.
i been watchin and you been workin, you are wicked close to the next level....
i'm not dissin at all i love it....
please continue..............
28th Jun 2014 1:17pm
giggle (nervous) curtsy bow, still feels unfinished, but alas got bored..
pls stop by soon again sometime:)
pls stop by soon again sometime:)
28th Jun 2014 8:28am
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28th Jun 2014 10:09pm
29th Jun 2014 3:00am
I am a woman, we plot, we plan - at least I still enjoy the whole stalking around like a caged tiger thing..curtsy bow......
7th Jul 2014 11:34am
This the first poem of yours I've read, and I'm impressed. I had to read it again to clasp it properly. I loved the first stanza, your wording is deft, and the closing stings. Bravo!
7th Jul 2014 1:44pm
30th May 2015 11:36pm
You have my admiration when this took my heart, I can tell reading you will be a voyage far & wide. Exhaling
1st Jun 2015 9:44pm
30th Aug 2016 8:26am
This honestly brought me to see my journey through addiction. I'm assuming that it's just what my mind read into it, and it caused a tear to fall from my lashes. A unique, melodic write. Thank you so much for gracing my mind with this symphony!
18th Sep 2016 3:02am
