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Thank you

Found an old poem i wrote back in 2009. Hope yall enjoy :)


Thank you for your faith in me
Thank you for your love
Thank you for your sympathy
You're my rock that will not budge

You keep me afloat
During my crashing waves
I am up then back down
I know you dread these days
Your kiss keeps me alive
And your love keeps me sane
Even though I'm enduring
Such horrible pain

I can always count on you
The blistering snowstorms you'd endure
I feel I'm suffocating
Until you open that locked door

I feel like I'm falling
Though I never hit the ground
Because your voice I hear calling
Though you never made a sound

I feel like I'm drowning
In an eternal lake of fire
But your eyes are pursuading
And fill me with desire

You pull me back to reality

Can't wait until you hold me
Feel the taste of your full lips
You cure all of my sadness
With just your fingertips
Written by BlackCarol
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