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6th Jul 2014 2:37am
Fantastic arrangement of the words. You could really feel the primal desire to be at the beach.
27th Dec 2014 11:03pm
I really felt enthralled as I read this story. The conflicting desires of both wanting to be at the beach and the need for a super soaker filled with baby oil not only overwhelmed my senses, but tugged on my heart strings a bit, too. I hope you will consider making published works in the future, as they would give Robert Frost a run for his money.
