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Wrist Art !!!
Let me make the best creation tonight
That same bright face
On the blank wrist canvas...
Brushes with sharp edges
Scalpel, blades,razors
scissors & knives
All ready for digging inside...
Painting it with my blood,
In those deep curving cuts
flowing in pain...
Did I say Pain ?
The Pain of happiness
to carve you on my skin
to decorate your pieces....
Red inked tattoo embossed
You look beautiful
And I miss you...
One more time !!!
That same bright face
On the blank wrist canvas...
Brushes with sharp edges
Scalpel, blades,razors
scissors & knives
All ready for digging inside...
Painting it with my blood,
In those deep curving cuts
flowing in pain...
Did I say Pain ?
The Pain of happiness
to carve you on my skin
to decorate your pieces....
Red inked tattoo embossed
You look beautiful
And I miss you...
One more time !!!
Published 20th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2014 7:51pm
wow... deeper then depth of a poetry and opens up so many possibility of interpretation
21st Jun 2014 8:31am
21st Jun 2014 3:04am
21st Jun 2014 8:32am
21st Jun 2014 2:00pm
Nice to see you. I mean really nice ;)
You have a way of illustrating pain. It did cut, if you know what I mean.
Really nice write indeed.
How are you?
You have a way of illustrating pain. It did cut, if you know what I mean.
Really nice write indeed.
How are you?
23rd Jun 2014 6:37am
24th Jun 2014 7:38am
The heart is heavy
a dream dies...keeping the illusion alive
breathing life into the lie...but no, it's too late
or is it
will the repair hold
doesn't matter - either way,
the heart is heavy
a dream dies...keeping the illusion alive
breathing life into the lie...but no, it's too late
or is it
will the repair hold
doesn't matter - either way,
the heart is heavy
24th Jun 2014 10:40am
26th Jun 2014 3:53am
whn it will happen s not important , but hope dt it will be...s most important...
26th Jun 2014 6:14am
26th Jun 2014 10:10am
28th Jun 2014 7:01am
2nd Jul 2014 6:46pm
Dang it, Brinda! I had to recheck to make sure I was still 'following' you, because I didn't see this new ink notification.
I hope you don't take this as an insult but your poems as of late, have increased in strength. The depth of your articulation has change beautifully; not that it wasn't already, it just has a different flow. Enjoyed this! :) Xo
I hope you don't take this as an insult but your poems as of late, have increased in strength. The depth of your articulation has change beautifully; not that it wasn't already, it just has a different flow. Enjoyed this! :) Xo
3rd Jul 2014 6:15am
This is really ok Rain :)
And thankyou so very much for your beautiful encouraging comment ! I have always considered you a mentor for poems !!!
9th Jul 2014 3:43pm
What initially seemed like self introspection become a view of a relationship!
10th Jul 2014 10:22am
