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Beach
..............................I
...........................go to
.....................see the sunrise
....................to feel the warmth
..................on my face sizzling my
................skin and the sand between my
..............toes with the ocean waves washing up
.............on shore and the smell of sea salt galore
...........................go to
.....................see the sunrise
....................to feel the warmth
..................on my face sizzling my
................skin and the sand between my
..............toes with the ocean waves washing up
.............on shore and the smell of sea salt galore
Published 13th Jun 2014
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13th Jun 2014 2:42am
..this poem was really calming, cak! I could actually feel the warmth from the sun and sand between my toes...
Great imagery and I love the structure and form...Xo
Great imagery and I love the structure and form...Xo
13th Jun 2014 4:53pm
