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Melt
I wanna be the ice upon your tongue
Slowly melting from your hot breath
Sliding all the way down your esophagus till im liquid
Flowing like a virus thru your rivers beneath your skin
To the chambers of your heart
Into the warmth of soul
Revolving all around you like earth does the sun
-ADuarte
Slowly melting from your hot breath
Sliding all the way down your esophagus till im liquid
Flowing like a virus thru your rivers beneath your skin
To the chambers of your heart
Into the warmth of soul
Revolving all around you like earth does the sun
-ADuarte
Published 17th May 2014
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17th May 2014 6:34am
ooh, melting and entering another.. that's such a seductive thought. You're amazing:)
17th May 2014 6:37am
Mmm :)) my Blue Angel thank sweets tht means so much to me your so wonderful u know tht.
17th May 2014 7:02am
Well you just electrified provocative synapses, with this sweet venom dripping wonder & sinful delight in my system.
Love how you encompassed this intensity with such little words..It's sensual & quite Erotic.
Looovveeee iitt!!!
Love how you encompassed this intensity with such little words..It's sensual & quite Erotic.
Looovveeee iitt!!!
17th May 2014 7:22am
Divinity Honeycomb wow i don't know wht to say but hank u for tht beautiful comment. Ant I happy tht u love it thank u
18th May 2014 3:14am
Awe Soul.....you found someone that truly has touched the tender beautiful side of your soul.....that I've always know you've kept hidden. Gorgeous write for your Angel. :)
18th May 2014 4:46am
Aww thank u my beautiful Flowergirl but there isn't one for me to feel tht way with. It's how I would feel someone tht i truly love and still Awaiting her
19th May 2014 3:46pm
Simply brilliant
Quite amazing how something can have more impact when the words have such emotional meaning to them, it felt alive. Very nice
Quite amazing how something can have more impact when the words have such emotional meaning to them, it felt alive. Very nice
22nd May 2014 9:40pm
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