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I love you

A heart deathly cold
and atop with mold
though all the same bold
gives in to the fold
her face made of gold
how her features glowed
goddess of importance
goddess of the old

a soul very kind
you'll not often find
no matter how far
you could ever have mined
one she does not know
after all this time
the girl of my dreams
her destiny lined

and she is not lame
and she can't be tamed
for she holds no blame
she's pure all the same
her heart full of game
she killed all my pain
my hate for world
is finally slain

the love of my life
well who could've knew
that there's good in me
as good's in you too
you've not an idea
no you've not a clue
no matter the hell
I love you.


my authors notes for one is, if you've read, tell me your thoughts, honest criticism and reviews are much appreciated:]
Written by War-Kid (Nicholas-Spock)
Published | Edited 22nd May 2014
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