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Trapped
Trapped In A Tower,Trapped In Her Own Mind,
Screaming That No One Ever Hears Because All They See Is A Smile,
Trapped In Her Own mind,A Tear Stained Face,
Trapped In A tower,planning To Get Out,
But The Voices In Her Head Tell Her To Stay,
No One Cares,No One,Your All Alone,Nobody Will Save You,
Trapped In Her Mind,
Trying To Get Out,The Darkness Pulls Her Back Down,
Her Screams,No One Ever Hears
Oh My Oh My,
Well Look Here,
There's A little Girl Trapped In Her Own Mind
Screaming That No One Ever Hears Because All They See Is A Smile,
Trapped In Her Own mind,A Tear Stained Face,
Trapped In A tower,planning To Get Out,
But The Voices In Her Head Tell Her To Stay,
No One Cares,No One,Your All Alone,Nobody Will Save You,
Trapped In Her Mind,
Trying To Get Out,The Darkness Pulls Her Back Down,
Her Screams,No One Ever Hears
Oh My Oh My,
Well Look Here,
There's A little Girl Trapped In Her Own Mind
Published 7th May 2014
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7th May 2014 5:16am
Nice theme behind this piece. I like the second line it's powerful and tells a story all in itself.
7th May 2014 9:52am
I don't no wether it was intentional but I like how you said " trapped in her own mind ,a tear stained face " ....it's like her mind is the building and her face is the windows. Year stained face remained me of stained glass windows ! I love this !
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10th May 2014 8:46pm
Hello Ninja, your latest offering is cooly written, although distressing. You've got talent.
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11th May 2014 10:10pm
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12th May 2014 6:11am
12th May 2014 6:00pm
I am in love this poem so much. I have read this many times and every time I read it I get goose bumps C: Great job Darling!
This poem and Little Miss Perfect seem like a perfect pair. The desire to break free and then becoming free. Sometimes we become imprisoned by ourselves because the programming of a lifetime is harder to shatter that the walls that others box us in with.
