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Funeral Death Speech
Maybe I'm Crazy[/font][/font]
Here I am,
laid in this...
pretty coffin
displaying decorative lines.
The body that lies
there is swollen, pale,
It doesn't even look
mine.
Maybe I'm Crazy
Written pages taught me,
family,
should be one loving
unity.
All I see before me,
are liars
rapist,
and pedophiles,
back-stabbers,
God-damned fuckers
all who I wished, would've died.
The thing is, and
Maybe I'm Crazy
,in some back of their
minds,
I'll be missed.
The things they've down
against me,
have been burned unto my skin.
The rage is
still eating me within.
Every nerve in my body,
swirling into a spine-breaking
twist.
Maybe I'm Crazy
Being ended after
I've been broken and
torn,
I can feel all that
madness start
to transform.
You are all to blame,
Maybe I'm Crazy,
I want revenge,
or just maybe...
after being used
so many times
I went insane.
Here I am,
laid in this...
pretty coffin
displaying decorative lines.
The body that lies
there is swollen, pale,
It doesn't even look
mine.
Maybe I'm Crazy
Written pages taught me,
family,
should be one loving
unity.
All I see before me,
are liars
rapist,
and pedophiles,
back-stabbers,
God-damned fuckers
all who I wished, would've died.
The thing is, and
Maybe I'm Crazy
,in some back of their
minds,
I'll be missed.
The things they've down
against me,
have been burned unto my skin.
The rage is
still eating me within.
Every nerve in my body,
swirling into a spine-breaking
twist.
Maybe I'm Crazy
Being ended after
I've been broken and
torn,
I can feel all that
madness start
to transform.
You are all to blame,
Maybe I'm Crazy,
I want revenge,
or just maybe...
after being used
so many times
I went insane.
Published 2nd May 2014
| Edited 13th Nov 2014
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25th May 2014 11:17am
ah man, YES my friend, YES... Only Family, (or at least mine) Can drive ya CRAZY Like that... Every time, EVERY TIME, That I go back to visit them, I seem to ALWAYS Leave wonderin, WHY IN GODS NAME DID I COME BACK... Oh Yeah, because I need my crazy Arse pills, that only kind tha tme family can give... Your Picture here, that is one of the ONLY Things in this Forsaken World that can UNNERVE Me, the Exorcist, AHHH... Hehehe o.0 that being said, I Really dig your story here my friend, in fact, with the right guitar an drums, it would be a really really kick Asrse Metal Song... The part about, being missed, in the back of some minds, that was, that was the right words, it made it real an pull off the page, it was great writing my friend... Eddie
28th May 2014 2:57am
wow!!
After 3 weeks of missing this site, I'm welcome by ur comment... Thank you very much Eddie. Your comment has lifted my spirits.
^_^
After 3 weeks of missing this site, I'm welcome by ur comment... Thank you very much Eddie. Your comment has lifted my spirits.
^_^
11th Jun 2014 11:14pm
Sorry it took me so long to read this but, wow. I agree with Eddie, this would make a bad ass song. You need to put some music and vocals to this and when you're done I'll be the first in line to hear. Bravo!
20th Jun 2014 7:16am
Lol... Maybe I will... I was actually writing with a rhythm in mind.
Feeling the music ^,..,^
Feeling the music ^,..,^
