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Angel of Mine

Broken and forgotten
I was lost in no man's land
Looking for something
That could end again
But I was desperate

My life brought me palce to place
This game was chase after chase
But all along I was just looking for you
My happiness

I feel like I'm on life alert
I've fallen and I can't get up
But this time the button is broken
And so I lay stuck

Through trial and error
I showed you a false mirror
But I was so stuck,
I couldn't tell you

Stupid is as stupid does
And I feel like I'm going to hurt you
I saw beauty in your insecure nature
And hope in the bit of courage you had left
We clicked instantly
And I don't want help up

If I break you
I wish to be broken myself
I want you to be happy
With me and myself
To keep you forever
And not share you ever
Angel of mine

Written by UnknownEmo

(Goes Without Saying)

Published 2nd May 2014 | Edited 3rd May 2014

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Re: Angel of Mine

Passiflora

2nd May 2014 10:01pm

I really liked your poem, even though when you put "If I brake you" it should have been "break" like someone is breaking your heart and not "brake" like you're hitting the brakes in your car. :) Other than that, I liked the way you worded your poem and thought it was very romantic!