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I Can Share This Poisoned Apple
Will You pull me, even if I push away?
Will you hurt me if I say that it's okay?
Will you kiss me with your poison lips,
Then bite me till sweet crimson drips?
If I let you in will you stay a while,
And whisper to me things so vile?
I'd let you, if you really wanted to,
Tear me into pieces
Just so you could be my glue.
You may do with me what you please,
Baby, just don't be a fucking tease.
Will you hurt me if I say that it's okay?
Will you kiss me with your poison lips,
Then bite me till sweet crimson drips?
If I let you in will you stay a while,
And whisper to me things so vile?
I'd let you, if you really wanted to,
Tear me into pieces
Just so you could be my glue.
You may do with me what you please,
Baby, just don't be a fucking tease.
Published 9th Apr 2014
| Edited 12th Apr 2014
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9th Apr 2014 9:18pm
This reminds me of a song by Within Temptation called What Have You Done Now. Its about the need to hurt the ones we love and the need to let the ones we love hurt us. Your poem feels like a compromise. I’ll bleed a little, if you do too.
Potent, Steven. Potent.
Name... Maybe.... I can share this poisoned apple..
I've become a fan of longer names.
Potent, Steven. Potent.
Name... Maybe.... I can share this poisoned apple..
I've become a fan of longer names.
11th Apr 2014 9:17am
Wow, I didn't really see it that way but now that you bring it to light I can't see it any other way. And I really like that name, thank you! It seems very fitting.. you described the feeling exactly, too, by the way. I'll bleed a little if you do. Perfect
