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doodiddleDaDaLove's Lament(ation)~[of]EndLessJubilation
angling to
ward one Angel
in dream of dream
lightyears[a]far
dream
land
is thee onliest realworld
that re
mains
here
to soothe a rattleclatter
bloody brainmind
awl butt lost lost lost
"losing touch wit reality"
which hath proven,
wit every doubt,
to be some vapid metaphor
reminiscent of some
thing
mistaken for/by/of ' me '
& all the loves
that lost themselves
from
this, my livingly mortal
remains
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dkzk---angelicPleasYodelledWhileUwait-----2014 wit
PHOTO: "WeeMustGetToThBottom[of]This!" bydkzk
Published 4th Apr 2014
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4th Apr 2014 5:10am
could be?
or could not
could be?
was that thee question?
like'a'like
"remains to be scene"
or could not
could be?
was that thee question?
like'a'like
"remains to be scene"
4th Apr 2014 8:06am
I just realised that humanity created metaphors (i.e. art) to remember, to remember a particular version of reality that they subscribe to.
A lovely longing plea, love.
A lovely longing plea, love.
4th Apr 2014 1:32pm
seems iyam compelled unto a daily
waiver
of 'my' subscription, in order to keep
the ghost
breathing ------------ too funny iyam,iyam....
in that
cosmicomic way
4th Apr 2014 1:42pm
Oh that's alright too, love. I was never a sucker for metaphors until I started reading about the academic mumbo-jumbo of poetry. It can be fun. It's part of the (western) ancient art of memory.
Waivering such things is attention to syntax rather than semantics. It's sort of like maths more than poetry ... butt aye could be rung ... ;)
Waivering such things is attention to syntax rather than semantics. It's sort of like maths more than poetry ... butt aye could be rung ... ;)
