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A Dedication To You From Me
I used to cry over him
because of the things he once said to me
but now all I do is thank him
for making a place for you to be.
I know I said I wouldn't fall again
but this time I fell & you were there to catch me.
So I can finally say " there will be no more heartache & pain"
because I have found true love & I'm sure my best friend would agree.
So baby I dedicate this to you , you see
to thank you for being the one for me.
Published 14th Mar 2014
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14th Mar 2014 3:12am
Hey babygirl, like this one... This is a good write, for strength, an for a love...
"I used to cry over him
because of the things he once said to me
but now all I do is thank him
for making a place for you to be. "
This first line is good, it pulls me in enough an the rest keeps me interested to stay readin, very well done my friend: deadwolf
"I used to cry over him
because of the things he once said to me
but now all I do is thank him
for making a place for you to be. "
This first line is good, it pulls me in enough an the rest keeps me interested to stay readin, very well done my friend: deadwolf
