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Life Haiku
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Life Haiku
Vital oxygen
spring water flowing
and life passes by.
Written by
opheliac
Published
4th Mar 2011
| Edited
11th Mar 2011
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ur 5 7 5 haiku
Anonymous
4th Mar 2011 10:23pm
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re: ur 5 7 5 haiku
opheliac
5th Mar 2011 3:29am
i don't need much, just a few words :)
thank you i'll take that as a compliment
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I am yet to learn more about Haiku...
anandosen
5th Mar 2011 1:05pm
& thats why I stopped writing some more for sometime. But still I can sense your delicacy factor Ophie in just out of your few words...
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re: I am yet to learn more about Haiku...
opheliac
5th Mar 2011 1:50pm
thank you Raja :))
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2011 10:10pm
I think you should remove the capitals, but other than that this is very good. A deep, profound haiku.
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opheliac
11th Mar 2011 2:06pm
oh yes i haven't noticed!
thanks dear
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KingSchmoe
(wangzijie)
11th Mar 2011 7:23am
If Zombies were chill
They would not eat peoples brains
They would stop for cake! :)
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opheliac
11th Mar 2011 6:41pm
lol i don't know the relevance it has with my poem but it's funny :)
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