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A poem from him
Creamy from head to toes,
she looks like vanilla, smells
like sweet sarsaparilla , she's
a map of intrigue that I need
to explore, finding myself
in her bones, allowing her to
find herself in my skin, she
surrenders to me with alluring
eyes, my thirst for her is endless
I ache for her comfortable heart
she looks like vanilla, smells
like sweet sarsaparilla , she's
a map of intrigue that I need
to explore, finding myself
in her bones, allowing her to
find herself in my skin, she
surrenders to me with alluring
eyes, my thirst for her is endless
I ache for her comfortable heart
Published 16th Feb 2014
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17th Feb 2014 2:46am
17th Feb 2014 3:13am
17th Feb 2014 11:11pm
Tommie this line is beautiful:
"I ache for her comfortable heart"
It describes so well the relationship for which I yearn.
Well done!
"I ache for her comfortable heart"
It describes so well the relationship for which I yearn.
Well done!
17th Feb 2014 11:16pm
GW I've missed your words!
You will have that, I know it!!Thank you my friend! :)
You will have that, I know it!!Thank you my friend! :)
18th Feb 2014 10:15am
18th Feb 2014 10:25am
