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Is it worth it
My love has no boundaries,
it travels as it may.
My love has no end,
it shines every day.
Your love i never see,
it can never be found.
I can never feel its warmth,
in love im never bound.
I hug you tight,
i turn to kiss,
you turn away,
your love i miss.
For all this unjust pain
does anything seem to fit.
for all you have done i ask,
Is it really worth it?
it travels as it may.
My love has no end,
it shines every day.
Your love i never see,
it can never be found.
I can never feel its warmth,
in love im never bound.
I hug you tight,
i turn to kiss,
you turn away,
your love i miss.
For all this unjust pain
does anything seem to fit.
for all you have done i ask,
Is it really worth it?
Published 21st Feb 2011
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2011 4:55am
The rhyming is nice, but thought the ending ruined the flow of the poem abruptly.
Maybe a two line piece (keeping with the rhyme) would work better), but it's up to you.
Maybe a two line piece (keeping with the rhyme) would work better), but it's up to you.
21st Feb 2011 5:03am
after looking back i couldnt agree more imma try and change that up tell me what u think
Anonymous
21st Feb 2011 5:57am
I think it's much better. :]
23rd Feb 2011 1:01am
I loved this poem! It had great rhyme scheme and flow. The ending is amazing!
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