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Is it wrong?
Is it wrong for me to feel empty.
Is it wrong for me to feel distroyed.
Is it wrong for me to put on a mask.
And hide my feelings.
Is it wrong for me to bottle my feelings up inside.
Do I need someone to talk to.
Do I hate the idea of that.
If so.
Is it wrong?
Is it wrong for me to feel distroyed.
Is it wrong for me to put on a mask.
And hide my feelings.
Is it wrong for me to bottle my feelings up inside.
Do I need someone to talk to.
Do I hate the idea of that.
If so.
Is it wrong?
Published 18th Feb 2011
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9th Oct 2013 4:37pm
i like it for the most part except for the ending, where you stop using the pattern used through the rest of the poem.
