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ink death
Deaths ink, black like the shadows in his soul
infect his blood with every he bring to life on the starch white paper.
ink reaching into his heart as he goes on, yet he continues to move his pen over the pad.
its tip leaving a trail of ink much like the jagged ,broken mirror that he held to
open veins watching the blood of ink that leaked on the paper
calling him to write more and more.
he watched with eyes frozen over by deaths chill
forever writing with the ink of his blood
words that must not be spoken
words that have been slated by his tongue
and lost among the corridors of his twisted mind.
the words are necromancer with deaths ink
reviving secrets once forgotten and thrown below the conscious
eternally writing his should and body intertwined with the ink
infect his blood with every he bring to life on the starch white paper.
ink reaching into his heart as he goes on, yet he continues to move his pen over the pad.
its tip leaving a trail of ink much like the jagged ,broken mirror that he held to
open veins watching the blood of ink that leaked on the paper
calling him to write more and more.
he watched with eyes frozen over by deaths chill
forever writing with the ink of his blood
words that must not be spoken
words that have been slated by his tongue
and lost among the corridors of his twisted mind.
the words are necromancer with deaths ink
reviving secrets once forgotten and thrown below the conscious
eternally writing his should and body intertwined with the ink
Published 16th Jan 2014
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16th Jan 2014 4:33pm
some good concepts man but avoid usin the same terminology repeatedly ia..word,ink
don't beat a dead horse with only a single angle on ideas either. try to come at it from right the fuck out of no where that makes people say wow i never thought of it like that!
you'll get it man...keep working find your voice....
don't beat a dead horse with only a single angle on ideas either. try to come at it from right the fuck out of no where that makes people say wow i never thought of it like that!
you'll get it man...keep working find your voice....
17th Jan 2014 3:29pm
21st Feb 2014 4:09am
Totally agree with Johnrot. Read a bunch of his more recent stuff if you want some good examples of deep attacks, hard hooks and mind-fuck-grenades that come right the fuck out of nowhere.
When you know that you've got a message, and you clearly have the message and the means... people are already back on their heels. It's like when Eddie Brock just begins to let the venom tentacles swirl around his shoulders. Civillians know they're fucked. He doesn't gotta threaten anyone. He just goes to work.
Ink, writing addiction, steam, all the stuff that fuels us? Let it speak for itself and your shit will grow at an exponential pace.
When you know that you've got a message, and you clearly have the message and the means... people are already back on their heels. It's like when Eddie Brock just begins to let the venom tentacles swirl around his shoulders. Civillians know they're fucked. He doesn't gotta threaten anyone. He just goes to work.
Ink, writing addiction, steam, all the stuff that fuels us? Let it speak for itself and your shit will grow at an exponential pace.
