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Fifth Dimension Rider
Squinted sun glare
reeling in the miles,
this motor keeps
him balanced.
He tastes sharp dust
flecks at the back
of his thoughts,
now unleashed
in centrifugal
tilts. Every past
flicker recedes
in rearview
memories. Tyres
rip into now,
charging steel
resolve.
The horizon shrinks
under thunder gaze,
yields opal-lined
highways.
Published 15th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2014 4:18pm
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16th Jan 2014 12:57pm
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16th Jan 2014 12:58pm
Touching upon the power of Astral Projection--perhaps?.....
feeling the possibility of the soul's transcendence beyond its (earthly) perameters.
As always,my friend, your unique, vivid imagery takes your readers on quite a cosmic journey!
Enjoyed this inter-gallactic voyage!
feeling the possibility of the soul's transcendence beyond its (earthly) perameters.
As always,my friend, your unique, vivid imagery takes your readers on quite a cosmic journey!
Enjoyed this inter-gallactic voyage!
16th Jan 2014 12:59pm
Dark Enchantress, you picked up on my hints, there's no fooling you!
Thank you for your lovely comments.
:)
Thank you for your lovely comments.
:)
16th Jan 2014 00:30am
You often use that mind for a vehicle eh?
Excellent rolling of the wheels Atakti!!!
Excellent rolling of the wheels Atakti!!!
16th Jan 2014 1:00pm
I use a vehicle to clear my mind!
;)
Thank you, Soul, for your unflagging support.
;)
Thank you, Soul, for your unflagging support.
Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 1:13am
I know this. Awesome! Deus Ex Machina!
16th Jan 2014 1:00pm
16th Jan 2014 3:33am
Love the way you paint a picture Miss Atakti. Had the mind wandering. Much enjoyed. I thank you.
16th Jan 2014 1:01pm
I thank YOU, for the read and comments! I'm pleased I'm good for a mind wander...
:)
:)
16th Jan 2014 5:24am
maybe he's got a balancing motor but my mind can barely handle the expanse of your reach, put some seat belts on your poem please, my crash dummy soul struggles at the speed of your light..and it happens with you sitting as still as a mountain...love getting wacked in the head with the zen of your trip
16th Jan 2014 1:03pm
Ha, Sem, your comments are outrageously far out! So glad I got you some zen in the end...
Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 8:29pm
trickee energee lovelee tew Rm
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