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The Question, Not Now-Part II
Lives flash before your eyes
Illuminating evils
Brighter than daybreak
By nights consuming veils
Take me hand
I'll show you actuality
Not in this world though
And its impurities
Oh but it's but a ruby rose though?
blotted in crimson tears?
Something to alleviate my fears?
but me?
Not now
Illuminating evils
Brighter than daybreak
By nights consuming veils
Take me hand
I'll show you actuality
Not in this world though
And its impurities
Oh but it's but a ruby rose though?
blotted in crimson tears?
Something to alleviate my fears?
but me?
Not now
Published 29th Sep 2009
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30th Sep 2009 9:49am
Your peom needs more i mean its good but it needs more! Just a suggestion!
30th Sep 2009 9:51am
Thx, I agree, for some reason it is not my best, read Bleed, that's the better one XD
8th Aug 2011 7:39am
