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I feel like a flower
I feel like a flower
Hidden in the desert
Left there, for the one who looks closer
Many rush
In their hurry I'm the one they almost crush
I feel like a flower
Hidden in the desert
Left for the one who doesn't mind the heat
Left for the one who doesn't mind the cold
Left for the one who really is bold.
I feel like a flower
Who is ready to bloom once more
Who is ready to embrace what ever life brings
Hidden in the desert
Left there, for the one who looks closer
Many rush
In their hurry I'm the one they almost crush
I feel like a flower
Hidden in the desert
Left for the one who doesn't mind the heat
Left for the one who doesn't mind the cold
Left for the one who really is bold.
I feel like a flower
Who is ready to bloom once more
Who is ready to embrace what ever life brings
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Re: I feel like a flower
3rd Jan 2014 6:23pm
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3rd Jan 2014 8:33pm
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3rd Jan 2014 9:14pm
Re: I feel like a flower
That is so immensely beautiful, Sara!
The imagery is strong and absolutely
amazing! Enjoyed the metamorphosis so much :-)!
The imagery is strong and absolutely
amazing! Enjoyed the metamorphosis so much :-)!
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3rd Jan 2014 11:00pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 4:05am
This is beautiful, loved your use of repetition. Well done.
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