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gamma
compile my thoughts on
gamma rays
as they infiltrate the atoms on earth
spill the secrets through my retinas
as the sun burns through your skin
linger forth into the moon light
as the bass crushes our souls.
gamma rays
as they infiltrate the atoms on earth
spill the secrets through my retinas
as the sun burns through your skin
linger forth into the moon light
as the bass crushes our souls.
Published 10th Feb 2011
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10th Feb 2011 3:38pm
11th Feb 2011 9:05pm
18th Feb 2011 7:02pm
I pictured myself at a rave, rolling on E. Or at a rock concert, tripping on lsd. The last line's to blame for the music, and all the ones preceding it for the drugs. "linger forth into the moonlight" is a beautiful line.
18th Feb 2011 7:04pm
18th Feb 2011 7:45pm
well there u go...u undertsood it he he,,yes it is a rave party on lsd :) imma read ur poems now...
thanks daisy...
btw we have the same name :)
thanks daisy...
btw we have the same name :)
