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The girl I love...

     
La fille que j'aime est si jolie    
That, I will never hurt her badly      
Never would i like to see her sadly    
And our love will always be lovely    
     
And  I will never hurt her badly    
All my energy will be invested, madly    
For our love will always be lovely    
All our days together will be fondly  
   
All my energy will be invested, madly  
When we immerse in each other sweetly  
All our days together will be fondly  
Our energy will be in each other eternally    
   
When we immerse in each other sweetly  
An huge happiness submerges us fully  
Our energy will be in each other eternally  
I never felt such strong feelings within me  
   
An huge happiness submerges us fully  
I would always like to see you happy  
I never felt such strong feelings within me 
La fille que j'aime est très jolie        
     



     
 
A comment : Petit_Minou made me discovering the Pantoum. I have tried here to make the beginning of a Pantoum, but just a little too short (five stanza, with help of Vee, where it needs six minimum)!    
Hope to be successful for this form of poem very awesome, but in my mind, very close to the fugue in music
Written by malin69 (malin)
Published | Edited 28th Dec 2013
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