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barren lands
an empty dead wasteland
is barren to the naked eye
but if you look closer
and see the unseen
those who live beneath
those without a dream
hiding from the man who put them there
while they shiver in despair
the man who put them there
lays his head to rest
in his 4 post bed.
is barren to the naked eye
but if you look closer
and see the unseen
those who live beneath
those without a dream
hiding from the man who put them there
while they shiver in despair
the man who put them there
lays his head to rest
in his 4 post bed.
Published 25th Dec 2013
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- Edited 26th Dec 2013 10:39pm
26th Dec 2013 10:38pm
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30th Dec 2013 9:14pm
thanks:D ive been waiting for some feedback , im gonna try and write some more soon
