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Senryu 5-7-5 (2013-12-18)
Alone in hotel
Splendid landscape in mountain
Where are you, my love?
Published 19th Dec 2013
| Edited 29th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2013 1:17am
Beauty can only be felt when our hearts are weightless, happy and free.
I feel the sadness in this Malin.
I feel the sadness in this Malin.
19th Dec 2013 2:08am
Sure, Vee, sadness to be so far one to the other... Hearts are weightless when we are cuddled together!!! But you are right!
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