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The morning, in front of my mirror
This morning, in front of my mirror
I see a man tired and not marvellous
Withered skin, unshaved and anxious
Because I must see you and be better
After a shower, when I dream of you
I should be more acceptable for you
But I don't love my body, my height
Too short and what about my weight!
But...
But...
When I'm arrived just in front of you
I become a true young man, for you
My eyes are suddenly opened, lively
Because I'm just seeing you, lovely
My shy smile is attracting your glance
And then, just at this time, you dance
Around my body to show me your surprise
And you are wonderful as the sunrise
Then...
Then...
Suddenly, you are in my strong arms
And what happens under your charms
When I feel your heart beating hardly
On my skin, your breast is so sweetly
When I smell your elegant perfume
All my heart has a supersonic boom
And I need to carry you suddenly
On the sofa to make love tenderly
Published 13th Dec 2013
| Edited 14th Dec 2013
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- Edited 13th Dec 2013 9:53pm
13th Dec 2013 9:52pm
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Thank you Gabriel!!! Funny to make jokes about my-self and to write such a poem! Your comments are always nice, I love them!
Just a new comment : text of poem has been modified a little bit after the comment of Gabriel, which explain the difference of some stanzas he published and the actual text!
Just a new comment : text of poem has been modified a little bit after the comment of Gabriel, which explain the difference of some stanzas he published and the actual text!
14th Dec 2013 10:41am
14th Dec 2013 11:09am
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 11:12pm
oh wow, i'm blown away how beautiful this poem is, truly this is one magnificent poem Malin, bravo!!!
15th Dec 2013 1:11am
Vee, this compliment from you is a true gift, I always consider your poetry as wonderful... Thank you so much!
28th Dec 2013 11:26am
When I smell your elegant perfume
All my heart has a supersonic boom
And I need to carry you suddenly
On the sofa to make love tenderly"
haha!i can relate to that!i love it!
All my heart has a supersonic boom
And I need to carry you suddenly
On the sofa to make love tenderly"
haha!i can relate to that!i love it!
29th Dec 2013 5:44am
