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My Eyes
My eyes are more like the sun
And not the moon
But if my eyes were red
They would be
As bright as day
And as the day falls
The brighter they get
But my eyes are brown
And as the day goes on
The brighter they get
And not the moon
But if my eyes were red
They would be
As bright as day
And as the day falls
The brighter they get
But my eyes are brown
And as the day goes on
The brighter they get
Published 22nd Nov 2013
| Edited 24th Nov 2013
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21st Dec 2013 7:56am
I LIKE your eyes they are full of life. They make you feel all warm on the inside.
