Undying Love

really enjoyed this poem and especially your reading of it!

Thanks I'm glad you liked it and my reading. :)

This poem of yours, not only did I enjoy, but it gave me such a peaceful, reassured feeling. I started to imagine what it would be like to be in love for all of eternity, where it never ceases, but just continues to grow in strength, passion, and impact...you get lost in it, however as long as your sharing the experience with God (that's who I thought of when reading), the fact that you got lost almost doesn't matter because you're onto a better feeling than before; the euphoric high never stops.

I really liked this part of the poem: "show me your existing beauty and your undying love and never forsake mine"...I thought about how we, as humans, never truly become complacent and a part of us always wants something better yet God provides that as he is infinite...our quench for something greater never gets filled because there's something to always be in awe of!

Anywho, I loved it!

Thank you for commenting and I'm glad you liked it.

God is love and I have been through a lot in my life if it wasn't for the grace of God I would not be alive today to share my poetic gift. "Through God all things are eternal and peace is within us all through his grace." :)

This was a beautifully written poem an I really enjoyed reading It. Magnificent work.

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it.