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you forbid to write
you forbid to write
I stopped…
You forbid to love
I couldn’t…
Is dt my fault?
You forbid d fountain to flow
But ice getting accumulated on d tip
Of the rock…
D melting is started…
Is dt my fault?
I stopped…
You forbid to love
I couldn’t…
Is dt my fault?
You forbid d fountain to flow
But ice getting accumulated on d tip
Of the rock…
D melting is started…
Is dt my fault?
Published 19th Nov 2013
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19th Nov 2013 12:01pm
very good,!!!
Rich of metaphors, meanings, images.
Also musical and rhythmic!!!
I enjoyed very much
Rich of metaphors, meanings, images.
Also musical and rhythmic!!!
I enjoyed very much
19th Nov 2013 12:25pm
20th Nov 2013 12:39pm
a very good write, being the first of yours I've read, it makes me want to delve in and discover the rest.
21st Nov 2013 10:31am
19th Dec 2013 7:23am
19th Dec 2013 11:30am
