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Light
light
slipping through the atmosphere
crashing into Earth
bouncing and reflecting light
stimulating birth
light stimulating molecules
light stimulating mind
right here on this small planet
this is where we find
light stimulating molecules
light stimulating birth
light rushing through the depths of space
light crashing into Earth
light crashing into you and me
reflecting how we feel
reflecting what our hearts hold true
reflecting what is real
slipping through the atmosphere
crashing into Earth
becoming and reflecting light
gives us each a birth
every moment when awake
every moment when asleep
light's coming from so far away
through space so very deep
we're in a sea of molecules
an ocean in our minds
first we're in this life
then gone
it's up to each of us to find
the purpose of our being here
the reason that we breath
becoming one with everything
before we die and leave
slipping through the atmosphere
slipping from alive
still light is shining everywhere
as death we all survive
slipping through the atmosphere
crashing into Earth
bouncing and reflecting light
stimulating birth
light stimulating molecules
light stimulating mind
right here on this small planet
this is where we find
light stimulating molecules
light stimulating birth
light rushing through the depths of space
light crashing into Earth
light crashing into you and me
reflecting how we feel
reflecting what our hearts hold true
reflecting what is real
slipping through the atmosphere
crashing into Earth
becoming and reflecting light
gives us each a birth
every moment when awake
every moment when asleep
light's coming from so far away
through space so very deep
we're in a sea of molecules
an ocean in our minds
first we're in this life
then gone
it's up to each of us to find
the purpose of our being here
the reason that we breath
becoming one with everything
before we die and leave
slipping through the atmosphere
slipping from alive
still light is shining everywhere
as death we all survive
Published 17th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2014 11:30am
I like the general flow of this piece, it reads very well. In terms of your audio may I suggest not rushing too much, as the poem felt a little hectic in places because of this.
"as death we all survive" - is actually an interesting final thought. Made me question where I may eventually end up.
Thank you for the read.
"as death we all survive" - is actually an interesting final thought. Made me question where I may eventually end up.
Thank you for the read.
Anonymous
17th Jan 2018 3:23pm
I too like how your poem flows.
17th Jan 2018 3:25pm
