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Unsure
Every time I woke up last night it was your face that I saw,
guess I must've missed you because I really didn't sleep at all.
I can't keep going on through pain of wanting you
but I really don't want to go on without missing you
guess I must've missed you because I really didn't sleep at all.
I can't keep going on through pain of wanting you
but I really don't want to go on without missing you
Published 15th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 4:04pm
The 2nd and 4th lines in this piece are really good. I like the structure of this poem, which sets up a premise then contradicts it. She dreamed of him, but she didn't dream, she's in pain, but she needs that pain.
