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She Is So She
That woman likes to do the nasty
time of day is not a concern
as if possessed by demons
like a never ending burn
Oh yes she likes to be wild and frisky
a flow that can marvel any sea
now I can only figure out
how some of that can be given to me!
time of day is not a concern
as if possessed by demons
like a never ending burn
Oh yes she likes to be wild and frisky
a flow that can marvel any sea
now I can only figure out
how some of that can be given to me!
Published 5th Nov 2013
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5th Nov 2013 6:51pm
hmm beautiful .. nice description of that wild woman ...liked it .. write on sir..
cyanide...
cyanide...
5th Nov 2013 7:02pm
my tendency is to go overboard with words much like Whitney Houston and Celine Dion did with songs from time to time. So even if the write isn't worth even a cent, I am always happy when I can write something short!
5th Nov 2013 7:56pm
6th Nov 2013 1:42am
5th Nov 2013 8:44pm
6th Nov 2013 2:46am
As I said before brevity and me don't find each other much so when it hits I try to enjoy it's duration!
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5th Nov 2013 10:10pm
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6th Nov 2013 6:16am
Thanks---language and the way a word can have more then pne connotation makes for nice variety
6th Nov 2013 2:15am
Jazz, lol.
Very comical.
I'm sure you have it, so don't go wandering off looking for it.
Nice one as always , bit shorter than your usual masterpieces.
KG
Very comical.
I'm sure you have it, so don't go wandering off looking for it.
Nice one as always , bit shorter than your usual masterpieces.
KG
6th Nov 2013 6:21am
what is that old classic, "Somewhere beyond the sea she's there watching for me..."
If I was a true poet, the art of condensing thoughts into their simplest form would be more of a concern.
Thanks for the positive feedback.
If I was a true poet, the art of condensing thoughts into their simplest form would be more of a concern.
Thanks for the positive feedback.
6th Nov 2013 5:24pm
JZM with a description like that of a woman she's more than so so. Hell you got me trying to find her (lol). Nice write my brother.
7th Nov 2013 00:46am
okay if you want to blame me for putting you on a quest that is fine! (laughing my brain off)
