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ok, ok, so he misunderstood...
she said she wouldn't like
to die alone...
he thought, bloody hell, it's
not like going
to the pub...
but what he said
was, "you go ahead,
I'll catch you up..."
Published 3rd Nov 2013
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3rd Nov 2013 6:07am
and did she think he meant it...? ;)
ah what the ear hears and how the mind interprets..Nicely done Dartford!
ah what the ear hears and how the mind interprets..Nicely done Dartford!
3rd Nov 2013 9:23pm
3rd Nov 2013 9:34pm
Actually it sounds like he really didn't mean it. Of course no one wants "to die alone." Although it is one of the few things in life we must do alone, especially since we begin to die the moment we are conceived.
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