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Alone
I sit alone in the darkness
waiting for someone to free me from my pain
can you see the tears in my eyes?
tears of sadness, and endless pain
will the hurt ever stop?
will i ever be free from all this?
The knife near me looks so tempting
to feel the flow of blood,as my life drains away
but i am brave enough to cut deep into my flesh?
waiting for someone to free me from my pain
can you see the tears in my eyes?
tears of sadness, and endless pain
will the hurt ever stop?
will i ever be free from all this?
The knife near me looks so tempting
to feel the flow of blood,as my life drains away
but i am brave enough to cut deep into my flesh?
Published 22nd Jan 2011
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2011 4:39pm
Second line: *Someone
Maybe "something" instead of "someone".. so then it makes more sense as you are referring to the knife as an object rather than as a person.
Maybe "something" instead of "someone".. so then it makes more sense as you are referring to the knife as an object rather than as a person.
22nd Jan 2011 6:25pm
