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I just wonder if . . .

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I just wonder if . . .
I knocked you out cold
And took you some place seccluded
And roughed you up a bit
And taught you a lesson
Would you feel the pain that I felt
When you betrayed me?

I just wonder if . . .
I tied you up on a table
And skinned you alive
Making you feel each cut
Each peel
And the agony
While waiting for your body to shut the pain out
And beheading you when that happens
And having your head on a pyke
Would you feel the pain that I felt
When you betrayed me?

I just wonder if . . .
I jabbed out your eyeballs
And ripped out your heart with my bare hands
And sliced off your ears
And amputated one arm
And One leg
Would that make you feel the pain that I felt
When you betrayed me?

'Cause see
I really want to test these theories
Would you let me?
Even if it's just one of them . . .
Written by Hyacinth
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