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Just Knock
The music has stopped...
her silhouette in the night
not seen any more.
Should have taken the chance
while there was light.
Afraid to knock on that door
never made it to the dance.
Life lesson...
Don't wait for the invite :)
her silhouette in the night
not seen any more.
Should have taken the chance
while there was light.
Afraid to knock on that door
never made it to the dance.
Life lesson...
Don't wait for the invite :)
Published 19th Oct 2013
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19th Oct 2013 00:44am
19th Oct 2013 2:19am
19th Oct 2013 2:04am
oh Hash,
I've often
wished I'd
knocked at
a door that
there isn't any
point at knocking
at anymore..:(
I've often
wished I'd
knocked at
a door that
there isn't any
point at knocking
at anymore..:(
19th Oct 2013 2:22am
Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 3:03am
He who hesitates...
Well written avice, hon!
Well written avice, hon!
19th Oct 2013 8:04pm
19th Oct 2013 6:10am
19th Oct 2013 8:05pm
Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 5:49pm
This reminds me of your other poem on watching her dance.
Hesitation, trepidation, vulnerability..oh so familiar, as if you're writing what im thinking.
Thanks Mr. Hash for sharing, I totally feel you on this one.
Hesitation, trepidation, vulnerability..oh so familiar, as if you're writing what im thinking.
Thanks Mr. Hash for sharing, I totally feel you on this one.
19th Oct 2013 8:01pm
19th Oct 2013 10:24pm
Missed opportunities suck, but don't forget all the other silhouette dancers waiting for a hand held out.
20th Oct 2013 4:08pm
20th Oct 2013 9:33am
20th Oct 2013 4:12pm
Sometimes we wait and wait just to let it slip away :)...thanks for reading :)
21st Oct 2013 6:03pm
22nd Oct 2013 00:37am
