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People That Just Dont Know
Hurt my face
They make me age
from scrunching
till I ache
You are so
Ignorant
You give me
Internal Pain
Its very deep
and very
Private
To make My
Vagina
Pulse with Pain
and to make My
Clitoris
Twitch from
Annoyance
Says You really know how
to
piss
Me
off
They make me age
from scrunching
till I ache
You are so
Ignorant
You give me
Internal Pain
Its very deep
and very
Private
To make My
Vagina
Pulse with Pain
and to make My
Clitoris
Twitch from
Annoyance
Says You really know how
to
piss
Me
off
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20th Oct 2013 3:08pm
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re: Re: People That Just Dont Know
20th Oct 2013 8:06pm
Thanks! But what kind of women have you been sleeping with? I sure don't feel this way when I orgasm. Freaks...smh. Haha.
Re: People That Just Dont Know
21st Oct 2013 5:49am
Gotta agree with Tim here, but then again, we're both coming from a male perspective. I can feel your anger, but I've known a lot of women who would describe aspects of making love as
"To make My
Vagina
Pulse with Pain
and to make My
Clitoris
Twitch from
Annoyance"
As with your first poem, this one kicks off nicely with some powerful lines...
"To make My
Vagina
Pulse with Pain
and to make My
Clitoris
Twitch from
Annoyance"
As with your first poem, this one kicks off nicely with some powerful lines...
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re: Re: People That Just Dont Know
21st Oct 2013 12:24pm
Thank ya ^_^ Confused though. I would describe my orgasms as "spiritually pleasing" or just "really fucking amazing" lol. I do see how some phrases could sort of be taken in a positive light but most people don't look past their negative connotations. I guess ha. Thanks for readin ;)
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22nd Oct 2013 8:30am
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Re: People That Just Dont Know
Anonymous
31st Oct 2013 8:36pm
Macee_Bryant,
To be able to make those parts pulse and twitch in pain and annoyance, someone has to really be good at being a dick, and I don't mean that in a good way! ; ) Way to drive the point home!
tornado
To be able to make those parts pulse and twitch in pain and annoyance, someone has to really be good at being a dick, and I don't mean that in a good way! ; ) Way to drive the point home!
tornado
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re: Re: People That Just Dont Know
1st Nov 2013 3:15pm
Re: People That Just Dont Know
7th Feb 2014 00:13am
You're too cute too piss off sweets!!
Keep that head up!!
Great write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
Keep that head up!!
Great write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: People That Just Dont Know
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2014 8:32pm
Clitoris
Twitch from
Annoyance
Favorite line. As the first woman to comment on this poem so far, I think I can safely say that I know what you are expressing here. Nicely penned :)
Twitch from
Annoyance
Favorite line. As the first woman to comment on this poem so far, I think I can safely say that I know what you are expressing here. Nicely penned :)
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re: Re: People That Just Dont Know
1st Apr 2014 9:35pm
So funny, I didn't realize only males had made comments.
I'm glad you can relate!
I'm glad you can relate!