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he finds her less than romantic...
I like to see
the bed the
way it was
when we got
out of it...
you say this
is a crap ex
cuse for once
again not
making it...
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 00:45am
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16th Oct 2013 00:55am
Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 1:17am
Re: he finds her less than romantic...
Anonymous
16th Oct 2013 2:07am
Each person travels at different speed and that's when feelings and thoughts divert, sometimes they converge and..sometimes they dont.
i like this Dartford
i like this Dartford
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 3:13am
I like a made bed just so I have a reason to mess it up again ;) When you get out of bed and look at the masterpiece you've created from having some wild sex is a beautiful thing. LOL...Good stuff, D.
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 3:53am
Ahhh...passions imprints upon tangled sheets...such a beautiful testimonial to a night of shared love(and lust?) ;)
(You are--to be sure-- a bit of a Romantic, at heart!) :)
(You are--to be sure-- a bit of a Romantic, at heart!) :)
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 5:14am
Your poem is actually humorous. I hope it was supposed to be. Much talent here, fellow-poet.
marcella1
marcella1
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 5:30am
lmao... I love this poem...
I like leaving the bed unmade, it makes me feel as if I don't live alone and have some one with me...
(of course... all just an excuse)
Great Work!!
Darker
I like leaving the bed unmade, it makes me feel as if I don't live alone and have some one with me...
(of course... all just an excuse)
Great Work!!
Darker
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 6:07am
Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 3:45pm
excuses! eXcuses!
shape up, man!
praises unto Thee Baron of Brevity
shape up, man!
praises unto Thee Baron of Brevity
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 7:11pm
afterwards, looking up overhead,
she says:
"I think the ceiling needs
painting."
He says: "Past me the smokes."
she says:
"I think the ceiling needs
painting."
He says: "Past me the smokes."
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 8:54pm
I like that, I like that!
Men think women
are romantic!
But we're absolutely
pragmatic.
Men think women
are romantic!
But we're absolutely
pragmatic.
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Re: he finds her less than romantic...
16th Oct 2013 10:55pm
Much thanks to all, my battery
is low so I cannot reply to each
at the mo...this light and
humourously intended piece
was heavily influenced by John
Hegley, who is a genius..:)
is low so I cannot reply to each
at the mo...this light and
humourously intended piece
was heavily influenced by John
Hegley, who is a genius..:)