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Attack of the Kaiju
(I had forgotten about my little monster, how rude of me)[/font]
It smashed my house,
with it's clawed monster feet.
I'm like excuse me,
could you be any more mean.
This mutant
over grown turtle, continues it's rampage.
Stomping on people and cars,
in total outrage.
He roars and roars
"Fear me, I'm a dinosaur!"
"No no, you're not,
you're a fucking eye-sore!"
I'm mad as hell,
as I scream "Die!!"
I go super saiyan,
and fly up high.
I beat the bitch down,
now the army
and marines
think it's my fault.
Screw this,
Go ahead Godzilla,
kill these ungrateful bastards.
Keep them busy,
while I empty out,
Donald Trump's
million dollar vault.
Buy myself a new house,
some where in Africa.
Dig a deep cave some where,
to keep my pet, Godzilla.
You'd envy me,
I have feeling
that you would!!
Why?
Not even the riches
person in the world has
their own
Kaiju! [/font]
I love watching Dragon-Ball Z and Monster Flicks... sue me[/font]
It smashed my house,
with it's clawed monster feet.
I'm like excuse me,
could you be any more mean.
This mutant
over grown turtle, continues it's rampage.
Stomping on people and cars,
in total outrage.
He roars and roars
"Fear me, I'm a dinosaur!"
"No no, you're not,
you're a fucking eye-sore!"
I'm mad as hell,
as I scream "Die!!"
I go super saiyan,
and fly up high.
I beat the bitch down,
now the army
and marines
think it's my fault.
Screw this,
Go ahead Godzilla,
kill these ungrateful bastards.
Keep them busy,
while I empty out,
Donald Trump's
million dollar vault.
Buy myself a new house,
some where in Africa.
Dig a deep cave some where,
to keep my pet, Godzilla.
You'd envy me,
I have feeling
that you would!!
Why?
Not even the riches
person in the world has
their own
Kaiju! [/font]
I love watching Dragon-Ball Z and Monster Flicks... sue me[/font]
Published 15th Oct 2013
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15th Oct 2013 4:56am
15th Oct 2013 5:24am
That was an cool competition!
I guess I was the only one who wanted a pet monster... lol
I guess I was the only one who wanted a pet monster... lol
15th Oct 2013 6:14am
I want a pet Kaiju! Haha, this sounds wonderfully explicit, a story of humor and fantasy unfold. I like the part about how you or the narrator empty out Donald Trump's vault while the government is distracted. Haha, this could be a political statement if you wanted it to be, especially now with the shutdown. American Anarchy rules! Sigh, I just wish they would open the museums. Lol. :).
15th Oct 2013 6:16am
HAha!
My thoughts exactly!
Thank You comment...
I'm happy that you like it!
XD
My thoughts exactly!
Thank You comment...
I'm happy that you like it!
XD
15th Oct 2013 8:40am
This struck on two levels: one it reminded me of the fun I used to have watching those old gigantic monster movies ... Second you're comment on robbing in the aftermath is not all that far fetched ... the electronic looting and other scams that went on in the wake of 9/11 ... some of it just hours after the towers fell was incredible ...
Great playful write.
Great playful write.
15th Oct 2013 12:29pm
Thank you very much Lobo.
I'm having playing with my writes nowadays.
and I do agree with you. I can only imagine the amount of people getting rob and such on that horrible day
I'm having playing with my writes nowadays.
and I do agree with you. I can only imagine the amount of people getting rob and such on that horrible day
15th Oct 2013 4:26pm
This was great fun to read,
but then I always enjoy your
writing...I imagined this as an
update of an old black and
white 50's movie, but with
greater irony for the contemporary
world...loved it!
but then I always enjoy your
writing...I imagined this as an
update of an old black and
white 50's movie, but with
greater irony for the contemporary
world...loved it!
15th Oct 2013 7:44pm
I actually had alot of fun writting this piece for the Attack of the Kaiju competition hosted by HadesRising
I'm happy you liked it! Thank You very much!
I'm happy you liked it! Thank You very much!
15th Oct 2013 10:45pm
16th Oct 2013 4:30am
15th Oct 2013 5:44pm
hahaha .. I used to love dragon Ball z when I was a kid.. this brings me back to my childhood days where I used sit in front of TV n watch these shows....
coming to ur piece its very creative , I have to admit ... u should write a whole new series about aliens n mutants ... hahaha
keep ur head up .. keep doing stuff like this..
cyanide.
coming to ur piece its very creative , I have to admit ... u should write a whole new series about aliens n mutants ... hahaha
keep ur head up .. keep doing stuff like this..
cyanide.
15th Oct 2013 7:46pm
I still watch Dragon Ball. lol
can't grow out of my animations addiction... haha...
Thank you so much...
I'm glad you liked it!
can't grow out of my animations addiction... haha...
Thank you so much...
I'm glad you liked it!
15th Oct 2013 11:49pm
16th Oct 2013 4:29am
18th Oct 2013 11:43am
Lol DarkerHalf, you are a funny lady, despite your handle. You gave me a smile Õή a very grey, cold, rainy day here in SA. I like your relaxed, conversational style. Very cool. Thanks
18th Oct 2013 11:52am
You're more than welcome.
and thank you for the comment.
I'm glad you liked this write.
:-)
and thank you for the comment.
I'm glad you liked this write.
:-)
