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a thing of darkness
Time has stopped
The wind has stilled
You are gone
Vanished into the wind
Where you went
No one shall ever know
I have taken my revenge
For all that you did
Crushed my heart severed my soul
I am done
Your shadow i am rid of
The darkness in my soul
Is no more
Good-bye my dearest
Finally i am free
The wind has stilled
You are gone
Vanished into the wind
Where you went
No one shall ever know
I have taken my revenge
For all that you did
Crushed my heart severed my soul
I am done
Your shadow i am rid of
The darkness in my soul
Is no more
Good-bye my dearest
Finally i am free
Published 11th Oct 2013
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I find hat the first poem a poet posts on this site, or any other for that matter, is very telling of what a person is wanting most to convey to the world. Breaking free and becoming your own person is an awesome feeling to be sure! Very nicely expressed!!! JJ
11th Aug 2014 5:01pm
I think the exact same thing. The first thing I look at from a poet is their first poem. Thank you much for reading and commenting.
