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The last day of life
If today would be the last day of life
I know the only thing i wanna do
Take your hand and kiss your forehead
Hug you strong and tell you how much i love you
And how much you meant in my life
I know the only thing i wanna do
Take your hand and kiss your forehead
Hug you strong and tell you how much i love you
And how much you meant in my life
Published 5th Oct 2013
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5th Oct 2013 2:53pm
I love this poem and the pic with... Just a comment, I can't be able to take a kiss like that to my love, except if she is on her knees... lol
5th Oct 2013 3:16pm
Woman on knee in front of man, well anything is possible,the love change so much.So glad you like my lil poem:)
5th Oct 2013 3:20pm
5th Oct 2013 3:48pm
No, nothing else... just I am at the same size than my love, perhaps a little shorter!!
5th Oct 2013 4:12pm
5th Oct 2013 4:22pm
6th Oct 2013 1:26pm
We should tell this everyday to our partner but some people forget this and they realize too late when lose the partner or in this case in the last day of life.Hope my poem is a lil lesson :)
7th Oct 2013 12:55pm
