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Locked in dreams.
There is something between
you and me which oscillates timeless
not noisy yet in its
faint existence
lived
did it pull me back?
i know no yet
i want it unspoken
be in my muse
not in my reality
so it never times, never a
yesterday.
You know when
i slip under your brokens,
not divided,
in nights under the
lamp less burning yellow
that way!
all the warmth is in your eyes,
i can't look straight into them
i lie muted in your
space defeated
where mornings has a song
in window panes.
you and me which oscillates timeless
not noisy yet in its
faint existence
lived
did it pull me back?
i know no yet
i want it unspoken
be in my muse
not in my reality
so it never times, never a
yesterday.
You know when
i slip under your brokens,
not divided,
in nights under the
lamp less burning yellow
that way!
all the warmth is in your eyes,
i can't look straight into them
i lie muted in your
space defeated
where mornings has a song
in window panes.
Published 3rd Oct 2013
| Edited 5th Oct 2013
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please don't take this the wrong way miss rakhi but i'm guessing english is'nt your 1st language.
there is a certain style in mystique that comes from the for lack of a better phrase "rough translation".
in no way do i mean to be disrespectful or say anything derogotory whatsoever . in fact it is exactly the oppossite. i rather dig it. it creates much more of a pure artform essence of language to your work...
i don't want you to change a thing...
i think this is dope lady....
well done mam...
there is a certain style in mystique that comes from the for lack of a better phrase "rough translation".
in no way do i mean to be disrespectful or say anything derogotory whatsoever . in fact it is exactly the oppossite. i rather dig it. it creates much more of a pure artform essence of language to your work...
i don't want you to change a thing...
i think this is dope lady....
well done mam...
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2013 7:18pm
Mr. Rot just said pretty much exactly what I was thinking. A few things could be cleaned up without losing that raw quality. It's sensational.
Aish
i felt so its bit filled extra but can't actually figure out.
Thankyou so very much,means alot to me:))
i felt so its bit filled extra but can't actually figure out.
Thankyou so very much,means alot to me:))
4th Oct 2013 4:35pm
I know what you mean Johnny
rather i'm glad
because ever poetry consists more or less consists of same words and emotions,
it drips when you pour own style.
Tank thankyous:))
rather i'm glad
because ever poetry consists more or less consists of same words and emotions,
it drips when you pour own style.
Tank thankyous:))
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Oct 2013 11:56pm
5th Oct 2013 11:55pm
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30th Mar 2014 6:59am
wow sister you have really tapped into something beautiful. keep letting the spirits run their words through you, your gift is much needed in the world.
10th Jun 2014 6:17am
