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You're So Mean!
I see you walking around,
turning smiles to frowns,
acting like Chicken Little
yelling the sky is falling.
Huffing and puffing
you tell us,look out...
"The Big Bad Wolf
will blow your house down!"
Always worried
about the other guy,
letting everybody know
Little Bo Peep,has lost her sheep
or saying Shh...don't tell anybody,
but I just heard,
"Mary had a little lamb."
When Jill went tumbling down
and Jack broke his crown,
you were the one
standing at the top of the hill...
I think you pushed them!
turning smiles to frowns,
acting like Chicken Little
yelling the sky is falling.
Huffing and puffing
you tell us,look out...
"The Big Bad Wolf
will blow your house down!"
Always worried
about the other guy,
letting everybody know
Little Bo Peep,has lost her sheep
or saying Shh...don't tell anybody,
but I just heard,
"Mary had a little lamb."
When Jill went tumbling down
and Jack broke his crown,
you were the one
standing at the top of the hill...
I think you pushed them!
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Re: Your So Mean!
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 5:26pm
love it..sweet little gem of a read..infused with such honest in the sublime..bravo, hashman :-)
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re: Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 5:29pm
Re: Your So Mean!
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 5:55pm
Cutely written, but so true that the ones that complain about the state of things are so often the cause of them...
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re: Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 8:16pm
Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 6:06pm
Lol damn, wouldn't that be the case! yep it's funny but also serious truth in this too! Well done bro. :)
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29th Sep 2013 8:17pm
Re: Your So Mean!
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 7:07pm
haha omg this is precious, i love the humor and the well crafted flow, brilliant!!!
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29th Sep 2013 8:18pm
Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 8:17pm
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29th Sep 2013 8:26pm
Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 10:22pm
You're always good to read,
Hash, and this a funny and
thoughtful piece...:)
Hash, and this a funny and
thoughtful piece...:)
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re: Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 11:37pm
Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 10:37pm
Oh em gee,this is just too cute. The truth told in a cute way. I like. And the title! Aww,I can imagine a 4-year-old's voice saying it.
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re: Re: Your So Mean!
29th Sep 2013 11:39pm
Re: Your So Mean!
30th Sep 2013 1:24am
It's soo true..."if you cannot be part of the solution, DON'T be a part of the problem!"
Such a clever incorporation---innocence with the 'harsher' side of truth(reality)!
Inked with Insight--to be certain!
Such a clever incorporation---innocence with the 'harsher' side of truth(reality)!
Inked with Insight--to be certain!
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30th Sep 2013 12:32pm