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What makes me......
What makes me happy?
My family
My friends
And you.
What makes me Mad?
My family
My friends
And you.
What makes me sad?
My family
My friends
And you.
What I can't live without
My family
My friends
And you.
Even though you drive me crazy this much is true.
It can live without my family, my friends and you.
My family
My friends
And you.
What makes me Mad?
My family
My friends
And you.
What makes me sad?
My family
My friends
And you.
What I can't live without
My family
My friends
And you.
Even though you drive me crazy this much is true.
It can live without my family, my friends and you.
Published 7th Jan 2011
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7th Jan 2011 4:53am
i like your style... it has a brilliant edge to it.. and it's unique in my opinion. with simple words you paint the reader quite a vivid image... and i dig that alot.
great write. i can relate.
keep it up :)
great write. i can relate.
keep it up :)
8th Jan 2011 4:02pm
12th Jan 2011 6:16am
It DOES make ya feel like that when you love someone that much and it shows, very specific and to the point in a cute, feisty kind of way, like it alot, im with her 'keep it up'
12th Jan 2011 3:28pm
12th Jan 2011 3:33pm
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